Series' Plot Becomes Tangled, Losing Its Heart

A book series that began strong became convoluted and drawn out.

The plot started with promise, but it became overly complex due to too much world-building.

Instead of focusing on the core story, the series spent more time on steamy scenes, which many readers thought took away from the initial plot.

The author could have told the story in less books, as readers were exhausted and lost in the plot by the end.